ライティング:IELTSやTOEFLのライティングで多い間違い5選!

IELTS & TOEFL Writing: 5 Common Mistakes

Are you writing essays and getting the same score over and over again? Would you like to learn some techniques you can use to improve your writing and get a better score on the IELTS or TOEFL? Well, in this lesson, I will teach you five common errors that many students make that can lower their score. After watching this lesson, you will know what to avoid, what to include, and why trying too hard might actually be hurting your score.

この動画ではアダムさんが、IELSTSやTOEFLのライティングで多い間違いについて語っています。

TRANSCRIPT

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5 common mistakes in writing task 2 (IELTS/TOEFL)

1) You’re trying too hard: big words, idioms, long complicated sentences

The CEO’s tenure at the company was abbreviated due to his reluctance to integrate more females into upper managerial posts, thereby drawing the ire of the Board who consequently relieved him of his duties.

The CEO’s time was cut short because he wouldn’t promote women to top positions, which angered the Board who then fired him.


parents make the best teachers

Firstly, parents know their child best, including what he likes and doesn’t like, such as books be likes to read, or favourite science topics. Parents can also talk to the child’s teachers and find out from them how to help him at home. They can also monitor how much TV he watches. Cutting down on hits might help his concentration.

2) no topic sentence

3) too many ideas

4) good point, no examples

5) I think x 2, 3, 4…


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